wasat he says eyes dart left to right.
wasat he says all hours of the night.
wasat he says its not his fault.
wasat he says dads coming home.
wasat he says as he looks for me.
wasat he says wheres my daddy.
Its me little one thinking of you.
Its me little guy ill be home soon.
Its me little man dads right here.
Its me little boy dont be scared.
Its me little brian its daddy im home.
The boy looks up but he cant tell.
the boy stares eyes start to swell.
I look down and pick him up.
I see him but theres no luck.
He starts to cry not knowing who I am
I reply I'm You little man.
The boy looks at me with eyes filled with tears.
Daddy lets him know he'll stay home for years.
What did you think
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wow.
artistically, this works.
personally, it makes me feel weepy. =(
i guess since so many people i've been close to are having kids, this kind of stuff really gets to me.
other than that, i know it's probably a strange thing to say but i'm so glad you have kids. it would have been a perfect waste if you'd gone through life and hadn't had any. i hope things are good for you at home.
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