This glass which we look through
has started to form a crack
I see things that I've never seen before
and they make me turn my back.
It's all about the hunger and want
but what I want is a different want
than the other side of the crack
Just listen to the wind, it screams
as it pushes through
this must be a sign from God
or maybe the feelings from my soul.
The glass is damaged beyond repair
the end is near
so be prepared
Author notes
I've just only jotted this down fast. SO any room for improvement would be cool
Please tell me what you think
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A great start. :)
I think this is definitely a great start to what could become a more detailed piece. I would, however, like to see more about the "other side"...more about what is waiting to spill forth once the glass has broken. But, that's just me. Been a long time since I saw you post anything, Mister....better keep it up!
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