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Rose (Pre-write)

A persons' heart's like a rose,
With the right love and care
They hold tegether.
But if they don't get enough
They molt and fall apart
Till there's nothing left
Apart from the dead petals.

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  • xxRainbowDawnxx
    May 27, 2008
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    Very true also.


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    May 25, 2008

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    Ah..so beautifully narrated truth is here..well done..and my thanks for sharing such a wonderful piece of the heart of yours....