Her broken heart cried,
Once too many times,
No, she will not bleed,
Shes stronger now, you'll see.
Breaking my heart,
Crushing my dreams,
I'm starting to see,
Love isn't for me.
Time and time again,
I fall so far,
Bracing myself,
Yet the fall still leaves scars.
Painful reminders,
Of times that have past,
Painful reminders,
That won't be my last.
A tear won't fall,
For anyone to see,
I'll prove it to myself,
So my heart will be free.
I won't take the pain,
I can't do it this time,
I'll put it behind me,
And I'll be just fine.
I'll see what it's like,
To stand at the end,
Put back all the pieces,
Then 'happy,' won't be pretend.
Just fight back the tears,
Just get through each day,
It will take time,
But I'll be okay.'
I'm sick of the pain,
Of "True Love's" lies,
I can't stand the hurt,
When a broken heart cries.
When a broken heart cries.
[ It Won't Happen Tonight ]
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Author notes
YAY I FINALLY WROTE A POEM!!!! its been like 2 months since ANYTHING came out.... I HATE YOU RIGHT NOW ANDREW!!
RRAAAAWWRRR !!
5. Breakups, tell me about breaking up with someone, being dumped. Anger, hurt, sadness, anything you want, just tell me a story. I just recently broke up with my boyfriend so if I relate to it well then you get brownie points!
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- Emotions Crying Out {Options} by newnoakua.
550 points, ended June 16, 2008, 92 entries
Gold trophy winner
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Absolutly wonderful! This fits me so perfectly; I love it! The rhyme was great, not forced like alot of the stuff you can find, and the flow was flawless. Glad that you could push through your writers block and come up with this.
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well thanks very much im glad you like it!!! IT IS A LOT EASIER TO WRITE ABOUT SOMETHING YOU ARE EXPERIANCING RATHER THAN JUST WRITING A POEM FOR A CONTEST LOL... (oops caps hehe) once again thanks for gold and im glad i gave ya wat u wanted cheer up life sucks but who know what comes after could be worse haha!
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Amen to that, definetly...
And yea, live life to it's fullest, because tomorrow you might be dead. lol
Congrats on the gold!
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good write
hey babe glad to see your back to writing. I am sure there'll be more tears to come in your life (but I hope there won't be)and the guys will never forget you I am sure cuz babe your the one that mom's think that they should have never let go of.
MEN YOU CAN"T LIVE WITH'EM
CAN"T LIVE WITHOUT'EM
Love ya hunni
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Hahaha...
Author notes give me a chuckle. RRAAAAWWRRR!!
Your alright kid.
Also the poem what a great piece of writing! You've got it back that's for sure! Writer's block blues we all go threw.
Welcome back!
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thanks a lot !!!!
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