I'm losing you both
to eachother,
My ex, but my bestfriend, one of two,
And my bestfriend - the other one.
You love eachother,
How unfortunate.
I said it's fine if you get together,
More unfortunate.
I'm so scared of losing you both,
That I'm pushing you away,
Unfortunate? Just plain stupid.
Of course I'm not okay with it,
But how can I say no, stop falling inlove?!
Wouldn't it be be simple.
You'll both end up resenting me,
'cause I'll always be in the way,
Everytime you kiss,
You'll remember that those lips
have touched mine...
You'll remember,
You'll remember.
So do what you will,
I'm not here to stop you.
Author notes
I'm such a bitch. I hate it. But that's just me.
Comments
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It's a really stong poem, really one of the strongest you've ever written. I agree with oneal, the best thing you can do is be honest, although sometimes it's seems ike it's too fucking hard.
I love the second to last stanza, there's just something about it that really makes me, wow, i don't know, just, it is really powerful.
I'll try and be here, even though I know that I'm no good.
Ly,
xxxx
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complicated
oh wow, what a delimna. I like the struggle that you have shown in this poem. Like the second stanza:
You love eachother,
How unfortunate.
I said it's fine if you get together,
More unfortunate.
I'm so scared of losing you both,
That I'm pushing you away,
Unfortunate? Just plain stupid.
The best thing that can be done is be honest to your friends, and indeed a ex with your best friend as you quoted it is "unfortunate".
thanks for sharing
Love Poet
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