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I want... (Pre-write)

I want to feel how I felt while you held me during the night,
I want to feel how I felt everything would be all right.
I want to feel how I felt to have you laying here,
I want to feel how I felt that you were so near.
I want to feel how I felt when I heard you say "I love you",
I want to feel how I felt to have you true.
I want to feel how I felt to have your trust,
I want to feel how I felt when it was more than lust.
I want to feel how I felt when we didn't have to lie,
I so badly don't want to feel how I felt when I said "Goodbye".

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  • adam2008
    May 31, 2008
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    aww that last line really gets you, good write
    xxx


  • xxRainbowDawnxx
    May 27, 2008
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    I know, i'd do anything to feel those feelings again too.