Love is indescribable when we first feel it,
it leaves us longing to hold on to it.
It makes us weak in its wake and,
leaves us empty when our heart it breaks.
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A short heartfelt piece!
truly wonderful in it's brevity. Amen!
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Amen
Beautifully said!
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Very well put.
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For such a short poem it captures the feel and emotion of a much larger one. It speaks volumes in so few words! Great write!
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Poets for years have tried to put love into words. And you did by saying it is "indescribable"! At 61 years old, I have found it for the first time! Too many hearts breaks to count, the elation when it is real can't be put into words. Bravo! Am adding you to my fav's.
Linda
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So true my friend..you have captured the essence of this life..and that is portrayed in this wonderful verse..well done....
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