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Foreplay

Missing image
  Your fingers paint themselves
  into my mind, I close my eyes
  and I can watch them dancing
'tween the honeysuckle and the rose.

I'm toppled by a laid-back drunkeness
while you fondle private pulses
where the sun has never shone-

Urging my splendid flower to fling
it's fiery midst wide open to the core
              an invitation to explore...





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  • In Too Deep1 gold member
    June 19
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    This is elegant , sensual and enticing. Beautiful flow and rhythm. No more is needed to be said.


  • Balldinger silver member
    June 11
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    concubines and red wine...

    this one burns a little bit around the edges...


  • zochit2me gold member
    June 9
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    Hot!
    Tastefully erotic...

    Becky

  • michellemybelle gold member
    May 25

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    This is GREAT! I love the ending and this picture! I read this and said outloud, WOW! One of my favs from you!
    Good luck in this contest, I would give you gold!
    Michelle


  • imahealer gold member
    May 25

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    Splendid HOT! metaphor! What on earth were you drinking? You have the prettiest disc I have ever seen! Take photo + words, and I think I see a winner. This is really good writing.
    ia, one question? Have you not ever been sunning nude, and tanned your petals? Bravo! You have my vote!

    (Host or hostess, this poem is a winner.)

    Linda XO


    • Ithica silver member
      May 25
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      imahealer

      Never beyond "that rosy glow"... !!!!!!!!! Woo- Hoo!!!
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