What happened to us?
Do you remember the laughs we shared.
It seems so long ago,
that we were so close.
I wish I could have you back,
but I know you've fallen for her,
just like everyone else has.
My best friend, isn't it?
The one who stole your heart.
Don't you remember me?
You've been my love,
ever since that fateful day we met,
twelve years ago.
You might not love me in return,
but remember the time you did?
It wasn't that long ago,
when we last hung out.
Laying outside,
pointing out constellations
and numbering the stars.
Will you remember me,
twenty years from now.
When you move away,
and I stay right here.
Stealing many hearts,
but remember one thing.
You still have mine,
just remember that one thing.
Author notes
I wrote this about my crush who I met 12 years ago when I first moved here.
A contest entry
- You Don't Know Me... by artisticxpoetry.
900 points, ended May 31, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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you are so damn awesome sister. I love you and had no clue you could write like that at all.
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Good
This is a great poem and I felt the emotions swimming throughout it. The author uses good imagery and maintains a poetic flow through the whole piece. The poem has a message and delivers it well Nice flow of words and a pleasant sounding poem. I enjoyed reading this poem, it rings true and real.
Typo "The one (whole) stole ".
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aw... It is really cute and I understand how that feels, something similar happened to me once. ...well anyways thank you for entering and good luck ^-^
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