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Observing the Crushing of a Heart and Soul

What have you done to the light in the sky?
What have you done to her soul?
You twisted and turned and bruised and burned
Every last inch of a heart I once loved.
What have you done to the kid I once knew?
When you sat around playing pretend.
What did you to the one I once loved,
And what have you done to my friend?

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if you know me down to a t, you should know who/what i'm referring to.

*growls from my corner*

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  • UnravledLove
    June 10, 2008
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    Wow! I like this alot it flows nicely and it makes me wonder what has happened. Great poem!


    • StillWalkingAlone
      June 18, 2008
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      it's about someone who hurt my best friend deeply. and thank you for the comment ^^


  • captaincrazy
    May 25, 2008
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    yepp, i know what you're saying. and it sucks for that person.
    this was good though. nice write