I'm dying inside, and nobody cares.
Can't somebody come save me?
Deep scarlet drops,
fall to the floor,
I'm dying inside.
Nobody sees the tears I cry,
cause I always hide,
before they see my eyes.
I want to live, but don't know how.
So for now,
I relish the pain,
this sharp blade brings,
watching the dark scarlet drops,
drip to the floor.
I'm dying inside,
you will never know.
Know I lay,
dead on the floor.
I gave in to the pain,
cut to deep.
I made the mistake,
all those other teens made.
Did you not believe me,
When I said goodbye?
I will never see tomorrow,
as my world goes black.
Scarlet blood around me,
as I say my last goodbye.
A contest entry
- HEARTBREAK, SUICIDAL LOVE, ANYTHING DEPRESSING by beautifull-ugly228.
425 points, ended May 29, 2008, 9 entries
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Comments
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Amazing! Really touched my heart so powerful and your words speak volumes well done
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A nurse told me that the lack of a spiritual connection causes feelings like this and also the need to overeat. 
She said she used to be that way until she found God. 
A tender poem that is written beautifully.
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Sis you are an awesome poet i love it real dee
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This is so sad
I know their are many in this world who feels lost and unloved .We crave the feeling of anothers warmth and the understanding that only love does bring . Never give up though look and you shall seek the friends and some of the who knows of this love. Never give up we are here
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that is beautiful. very nicely penned.
-kassie
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I really like this poem, I can relate to it a lot. I've been there.
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That was exactly what i was looking for in this contest. It spoke so deep to my dark side which i was asking for. It explain the pain so well and thoroughly with so few words. It just relaxed me like depressing stuff does for me.
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A few spelling errors, but good work.
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Could you please point out which words I have misspelled so I am able to go and fix them?
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This is bloody awesome! Good write, I want to see more.
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that was such a good poem,keep writing, i look forward to new poems
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Nicely done, thank you for entering and good luck in the contest.
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WOW!!! That was amazing I loved it!!!
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