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Finding Love

 

Lips brushed with integrity
There is no sleaze
I would love nothing more than

to make your knees buckle
I will hold you tight until the
two shall become one
Uniting the sacred

Arms around your hips
like I am afraid you will escape me
I will never let you go
Sweet chocolates after an evening kiss
I told you I'm not like every guy,
testosterone boy, full of bad intentions

Let me take you where your heart is longing to go
Picking it up off the dusty road of life's travels
This is only the beginning
Wait and see what love may bring

 

 

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this may have not been what you were looking for, idk

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  • movedon
    July 25, 2008

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    Everyone longs to be loved, held, told they are special. And when you're still looking is the most painful time. Congrats on the silver trophy.

    Warmest,
    Mylee


  • Pure Thought silver member
    May 30, 2008
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    Must have been what she was looknig for. Well penned silver.
    Buddy


  • XXxXBassMeisterxXxX
    May 28, 2008
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    that was sweet. i loved it.


  • Abby In Chains. silver member
    May 26, 2008

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    "i would love nothing more than to make your knees buckle"

    beautiful. you're the guy every girl is searching for. whoever gets you better hang on tight.

    Abby


  • tortured-heart
    May 26, 2008

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    beautiful write...dang...this is what every girl is looking for once they realize that bad boys aren't really where its at lol
    peace, love, & cheese


  • Cannonsfire
    May 25, 2008

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    Well apart from the typo's It is exactly what I look for, someone who will be beside me, encouraging and lovingly without demanding all of me all the time. I am fiercely independent but in need of arms that hold me gently when I am sad and ones that will laugh with me when I am happy. Thank you it's beautiful...now to the typo's 'dusty road of 'life's travel....'nothing more than to make 'you(r) knees buckle'....oh you have made them buckle with this lol Love, Chez

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