You pour into me your ocean
and I never knew
you would be an endless flow.
Sometimes salty
and sometimes stormy.
But most of all vast, mysterious
and very beautiful.
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This is really nice... overcome by the unexpected flow, honoring it all.
Marlene
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mmmmmmm I like the metaphor you present, the comparisms are exactly how I'd imagine to... very fitting to the pic. Thanks for entering!
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Oh, this is stunning. Juls
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"an endless flow"... i like that
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