I know it must hurt to think I don't care...
I wish this never happened...
I'll be fine without you...
But I'm not without you...
The signals flying over head,
My heart pumps morse code... SOS..
Mind taken adrift not knowing where to go..
I followed your shadow...
You finally saw me and it was too late,
You slammed the door shut,
Faster than it opened..
You became the silhouette of my heart...
You left me out to dry,
So I made you a ghost...
I made sure you missed me,
At the cost of what...
I always knew my feelings would never last,
I never knew that our friendship wouldn't last...
Turn on the song that means the most,
And know your without me...
I skipped a step and left it all behind...
I ripped you from my heart,
But not from my veins..
This is your fault...
Your the worst,
A best friend lost,
But I'm to blame..
Aftermath of a lovehate tragedy.
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Comments
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Hmm. Interesting write; your poem exudes the raw emotions that circulate your mind. (Or from wherever you've written this.)
I agree with the comment below: "My heart pumps morse code...SOS..."-- amazing line.
Take care now
And continue writing!
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wow i can defiinitely relate to this... beatiful poem really thought provoking..
"I always knew my feelings would never last,
I never knew that our friendship wouldn't last..."
those lines were beatiful they're stuck in my head, best of luck in the contest
xx he broke me
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wow
its amazing, can really feel its meaning i definately relate to this!!fair play
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Thank you for entering my contest, and sorry it took me so long to comment...
I like "My heart pumps morse code... SOS.." very much, bittersweet... yes, I think that's the right word for this poem...
Thanks again and keep on writing!
Annie
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Wow.
Good luck in my contest!
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Sounds sad but made a bitter sweet love tale. Touching to read.
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