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Can't You See?

You think I'm strong?
Well guess what,
you're wrong.
I'm just as weak as when I was small,
but that's kept inside,
I don't know how long.
Different phases,
same old me.
Forgiving as ever, can't you see?
The act ends here,
with this last line.
For I need you, but you don't need me.

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  • Closetpoet1971
    May 25, 2008

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    Powerful statement!

    Very nicely stated and well written! So much said in so few words...it is amazing how people often mistake an outer view of strength without remember the person they are looking at sometimes!! Thank you for sharing!!

    Shannon