Darkness hides underneath beauty
Suffering
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5 words or 500
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A contest entry
- PIF/Quickie Pic Prompt by Carolina Moon.
575 points, ended May 25, 8 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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This poem is a wonderful take on the picture, i like the depth you have used here, i would have choose the 5 words also, i dont write a lot of long poems, congratulations on your bronze, as always keep up the wonderul writing, ~Amy
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that is so true. there is always he dark side o every beauty that we rarely see. so true an so to th point!
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powerful words... and beautiful....
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wow... that is really good... *jealous glare* i wish i could write like that...
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wow, i really love this one. you have a talent for expressing so much in a few words. a great job on the prompt, the bronze was deserved.
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Congrats on the bronze! well rounded 5 words!
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wow 5 words that say so much. Great job on the prompt. Thank you for sharing this.
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those few words say so much! love this
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