Oh God
I glimpse
a waterfall streaming from
up of the mountains where you perpetuate
that is why, it views like
joining to me
as I converse to you from the core
Oh God...
A contest entry
- Beautiful Peace by VoltaicHypnosis.
600 points, ended June 2, 2008, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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wHAT A SIGHT OF BEAUTY
Your write add to the beauty to know it is God- not a mystery....mac
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A beautiful piece of beautiful peace; well done and best of luck
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Nice...
I really like this, I totally understand the use of the waterfall in your poem. Sometimes we've just got to sit back and watch the outpouring of His Spirit, for there are times it just rushes down upon us and all we can do is spread our arms, look up and bask in the the Glory.
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