“Kiss me” she said
And it had begun
The blend of two different skins
Into one
With love and rage combined
He slowly made his way inside
Pulling off the rose pattern shirt
Her bared chest was exposed
A blush from both faces
No words were disclosed
His fingers moved quick
As he felt her
There in bed she layed
Only a child of sixteen
Please tell me what you think
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"Kiss me"
reminds me my first encounter
'and it had begun
the blend of two different skins
into one'
in sex different skin does not matter
'with love and rage combined
he slowly made his way inside'
'with rage '?
isn't the entry too soon
'pulling off the rose pattern shirt
her bared chest was exposed'
moonlight
'a blush from both faces
no words were disclosed'
it happens like this the first time
'His fingers mpved quick
as he felt her'
where?
'There in bed she laid
only a child of sixteen'
but it was she who asked for it, didn't she?
and the boy also seems to be 15 or 16...
so who's responsible?
he?
she?
parents?
society?
or is it the way people learn?
(By the way, it happened to me much ealier
I didn't ask for it but, I must confess, I enjoyed it...)
PLEASE, ANSWER IF YOU READ IT...
Thank you...
A good write I must say...
Galaxy2
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