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Take me

Missing image
Save me
From the forsaken pain
Lift me up into your kingdom
I gave my life for another’s
And fell into this pit
I have suffered enough
Set me free

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12 POETS

NO MORE THEN 20-36 WORDS

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  • Angelflower
    May 28, 2008

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    This was a wonderful take on the prompt..
    I really loved this.. you did a great job..
    Thanks for sharing..
    Best of luck.

    Angel


  • Sandra R Reynolds gold member
    May 28, 2008
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    Great write and good flow.

  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    May 25, 2008

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    Oh I like this one also you do very well with these short ones thansk for sharing this goodluck in the contest best wishes and much love always


  • SuicidalLover
    May 25, 2008

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    Oh...wow. This is hard hitting. I mean like yeah wow. I wish you luck! Great BG too!
    ~Kystal angel