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Playing Off Another

I think you should

Bite me

Your attitude's arousing
My stimulation sensories are
Doing back flips in your
Deepened breathing and
Closed eyes, grasping hands
Clenched fists around my
Waist and my fingers reach for
The back of your neck//
Shoulder blades//
Chest//
Hips

Any piece of you I can hold onto,
For I fear my euphoria may have me
Floating above this moment and for once
I don't want an out-of-body-experience.

[I want to experience you and you alone.]

Heavy, this feeling is overbearing and
I-Can't-Take-This-Anymore!

Take me, Take me, Take me
My tongue is yearning to explore
Every inch of your skin and I know
You're so soft I just want to hold you
Feel you
Have you

Every minute of everyday
[and yes, I am that selvish.]

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  • Bean Sidhe silver member
    June 5, 2008
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    S-Elvish! You lovely charming girl. This is preciously you! Brava!


  • XXxXBassMeisterxXxX
    May 27, 2008
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    i loved it. it was intense. it was strong worded and well written.


  • Rogue-Poet
    May 26, 2008
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    Wow

    The intensity is wonderful...It definately strikes a chord.