I bleed to void the pain
numb the torturous agony
calm the raging tempest
Liquid life from my veins
Sedate me, take it away
I bleed for I cannot cry
tears shall not suffice
ducts are long long since dry
Liquid life from my veins
Marring not the glassy windows
I bleed for I will not scream
no validating the beast
no satiating his hunger
Liquid life from my veins
Help me starve the monster
I bleed for my body is pained
I bleed for my eyes are dried
I bleed for my voice is dead
I bleed
And I'll bleed until I die
A contest entry
- Suicide Solution by Blood Magick.
540 points, ended July 26, 2008, 79 entries
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I hope you like it...
Comments
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God, I Love this poem. very strong, and it bears a resemblance to my style of writing. But, you use more adjectives than I do, but it dosen't sacrifice anything inside the poem itself. VERY nice job, and good luck in the contest =]
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Holy sha moly...strong. Angst...I love angst poems! This is so wonderful and deep....My voice is dead, my eyes are dried. my body is pained! Wonderful use of imagery.
Mylee -
There is so much emotion in this poem, it is amazing. It is very expresive and calls to my heart. nice work
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