When you're attached to the feeling
of blood pouring, spilling
It's impossible to quench the flow
When you're attached to the feeling
of blades numbing, chilling
It's impossible to let go
Anything to escape the feeling
of darkness controlling, killing
And you never want to sink any lower
Anything to escape the feeling
of happiness dying, stilling
And you can't sink any lower
So drag the blade across your skin
And count this day another win
A contest entry
- Suicide Solution by Blood Magick.
540 points, ended July 26, 2008, 79 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Emotions Crying Out {Options} by newnoakua.
550 points, ended June 16, 2008, 92 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
I hope you like it...
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Oh my fucking christ the background is making my eyes liquify and bleed onto my keyboard. Aside from that I thought this was lovely. =D
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Oh wow, I really thought it was a suicide poem like any other, but I read the end, and I really liked it. It was very dark, and I liked the rhyming that went with it. It's a very nice write, and good luck in my contest =]
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Kind of hard to read with the colors contrasting so much, well done beyond that. A strong write!
Mylee -
I do
A great write. Dark like me. -
My favorite.
I really love this one. It's a feeling I know way too well. I lvoe the rhythm, and just the overall flow of this poem. I really like your style. Amazing write. Well done.
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