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All I want
is to feel affection.
All I want
is to fight rejection.
All I want
is to feel him pressing against me.
All I want
is me for him to see.

Is that too much too ask for?
I just feel to the floor,
cyring for a love faraway.
Now my heart's in disarray.

All I wanted
was to feel his hand.
All I wanted
was for him to understand.
All I wanted
was to tell him how I felt.
All I wanted
was to see him and melt.

To him I would say:

"I love you.
I just wanted to say it.
I know you didn't have a clue,
but now I must admit,
I think I love you.

Please don't assume,
Please don't reject me.
All I wanted was for you to consume
who I am and who'll I'll be.

Forgive me for this outburst,
but don't intervene
I want to tell you first
how much to me you mean."

I wish I could say this,
but I'm tto frightened.
With him I wanted to feel bliss,
just to see him my day brightened.

To a love that feels lost,
but never finished,
this comes at no great cost,
my love for him will never diminsh.









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  • -shiningstars-
    June 2, 2008
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    WOW! The flow was really really good! I love this ,"Forgive me for this outburst,
    but don't intervene
    I want to tell you first
    how much to me you mean."
    Its really raw... baby doll.... if you ever feel like its all too much . . . you know what to do
    ~kenz