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Love Is Not Wrong

My angel's feathers floating away
Drifting with my thoughts
To a time and place
Where we can be together

Where no one calls us wrong

My dreams and inspirations
Withering away
Not fate not destiny
Can change what I think

I think that we aren't wrong

My spirit and my love
Cannot be taken away
My angel will stay forever
In my heart

I know that what is right cannot also be wrong
My angel is not wrong
And no one can steal love

Author notes

CJ Poet Laureate
I VOTED: Dane Cook

Is evil really bad?

going to a funeral: I want to be your AP cat

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  • ThisIsMyWonderland
    June 22, 2008

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    This is really nice. Honestly, if you would have put this much pasion into your other ones, you would have won hands down. This is freaking awesome. 9/10


  • going to a funeral
    May 26, 2008

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    Inspirational

    Beautiful, this will give people a new way to look at love. And I agree with you that love could never be wrong.....I would like to know your username so that I can put you in my family. Great Job!!!!!!!!!!


  • darlintlc silver member
    May 26, 2008

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    Thanks for entering my contest "Good v.s. Evil"

    Love can never be bad..even if it's not suppose to be!

    Good job and good luck!!
    darlintlc


  • Ephiphany
    May 25, 2008
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    very interesting take on the prompt. thank u and good luck.-e

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