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The Falling

Falling down
sable emotions
covers every inch
of my soul.

Spirit of night
the dark king
comes to possess me.

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  • marlene47 silver member
    May 25

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    Nice imagery, sable emotions covering your soul and the dark king possessing you in the night!
    Marlene

  • crimsondew silver member
    May 25
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    Foreboding...goes with the image..All the best!


  • PresidentDangerK2
    May 25
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    Good job, but by "posses" do you mean possess? Anyway, good luck in the contest!