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Innocent

Innocent and pure
she slumbers...
Evil slithes in
waiting to corrupt...
Whispering it's will
"wake my love"
Open your soul
I will teach you...
all the pleasure's
Of the body and soul

It's time to abandon
innocent things
The world awaits...
your passion!

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darlintlc

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  • LadyDementia gold member
    July 11, 2008

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    Wow, this is a great piece. Has a very creepy, sneaky feel to it. Dripping with darkness, superbly penned


  • faderman1959
    May 25, 2008

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    Great take on the pic! Very dark and forboding. The loss of innocence! A very emotional poem on many levels! Well done!


    • darlintlc silver member
      May 25, 2008
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      Thanks for commenting on "Innocent"

      You're always so kind and I thank you!

      your friend
      darlintlc