I've walked alone in the shadowed night
for god knows how long
still my dreams are within sight
all embraced with in my song
Now as I take the stage
and hear the roar of the crowd
I feel the rock swim through my soul
My veins pumping out loud
burning me cold.
The amps blare out to my soul
And this is all I know
My life was meant to be
On this stage you see
Chorus
Let the song flow
and save your soul
dream big or you'll never know
what your life has to show
For life is the stage
and I’ll always play
to make life mean something
more.
My dreams are the score
The amps blare out to my soul
And this all I know
My life was meant to be
On this stage you see
What life is one that doesn't live
to feel their dreams out to the end
What life can mend
whose lost the will to live
So I'll play on
To keep my dreams afloat
to find my only dawn
I'll just keep playing note by note
Chorus 2
(whispered)
The set is done take a bow
The crowed is in awe
What shall we do now
Lets play one more song
Encore!
(Repeat Chorus 1)
Author notes
This is probably the best piece i've written thus far.
A contest entry
- Write me Lyrics by Bryan-CarnelianHope.
800 points, ended June 25, 2008, 18 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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WoW! Nice..it was truly energetic lol. I felt as if I was right on stage with you. Great write!
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good job. good luck in the contest!
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Very nice
I love how at the end you placed a vocal change. It gives the song charicter! Great job and thanks for entering!
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YeaH! :)
Alright, friend! Everything's gonna be allllllright as long as we've got our dreams, YeaH!
Hahahaa, jk. Not a bad write, but...it is kinda...well, preachy keen, if you know what I mean...no offense dude, but this is not your best.
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