Fiercely torn,
from past to present
a dancer in her own masquerade;
Tip toeing through tumbleweeds of spikes
her life is unconditionally dedicated to disaster.
Shredded to pieces, morals and dignity.
A fighter in many ways, except one.
Fear of permanent connection,
viciously attacking
her judgment,
on trust!
Soiled frame of mind
desertion,
over usage, abused.
belittled Princess,
scarred, damaged.
Plays heavily
on deadening
her role...
Author notes
Idea came from this picture: http://deija.deviantart.com/art/Ballet-Princess-Attitude-14681998
I had watched Tory do this and hope I am doing right. Of course she puts picture there.
Get well Tory, I love you hon.
First contest entry. Just throwing it out there as I wait for her to come to... She dared me to do a contest.(Oh my)
A contest entry
- Free verse fun. by crushed.
500 points, ended June 9, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I really liked the word usage. You used a lot of very vivid and descriptive words and I could feel the passion behind them. Thank you for entering my contest
-crushed -
well done. I loved it. I love you too. And we all make errors I still do.
I am to, and reading you.
Tory
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enjoyable script set up nicely, It is a very well written piece. Such darkness from a dancer in dress.
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