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[ Haiku ] Full Moon

high tide-

like a thief in night
this ocean...  steals my sand




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  • Swan song gold member
    May 31, 2008
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    Excellent Haiku!


  • azure85 gold member
    May 28, 2008

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    high tide-

    like a thief in night
    this ocean... steals my sand

    Oh, a very nice haiku about the sea, thank you so much.


  • suseann
    May 26, 2008
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    Wonderful images painted in such sort verse is this.


  • marlene47 silver member
    May 25, 2008
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    Nice lonely/sad image - the draining or losing ground.
    Marlene


  • grannyeri gold member
    May 25, 2008

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    Very witty poetry you have penned here - neat haiku that gives us a great image in these few words. great last line.

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