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Shatter

My anger chokes the words
I wish to say
My tears drown their sound.

My heart aches at the same time,
But you continue along that line.

This time
My frustration draws the line
between love and hate,
And I realise you cannot me mine.

My heart pounds,
But not for you.

My anger confuses my emotions
and I cannot think straight.
All this hate,

Shatter,
You have destroyed my soul.

Shatter.

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  • Zephyrr
    October 3

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    Deep

    This was so strong and the imagery screams out to me. The choice of words, "shatter", "destroyed", were awesome. I was really able to connect with what you were saying, the mark of a great poet! My favourite part was the last line , when you isolated the word "Shatter", it left a lasting impression! This was brilliant!