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Nothing is Real

"what is Real?"
that was the deal
give an explanation

and no more association

 

none

 

words racing in

but only one stands out

"nothing"

 

Nothing is real

that is the deal

nothing is true

not a thing you can do

 

SEE,

There is freinds

that 'have' binds

but that is a lie

cuz the next thing you know,

they are saying bye

 

There is love

like the dove

so 'true' and so 'pure'

but that is just tainted

with hate, lust and lure

 

There could be the home

where your family roams

with happiness and such

but that is just a pretty picture

put up with a crutch

 

See,

freindship goes bye

and love is just tainted

home always goes dry

becuase the picture was painted

 

Those are the joys

that don't annoy

the things we call real

but here is the deal

nothing is real

not even that feel

all the joys

and the toys

all just a lie

maybe they too

will all go bye

 

 

Author notes

I got reall creative with the name, no?...jk...yea, yea, i know, stupid joke...


ANYWAYS... my name is raphire but my thing says living backwords spelled backwords which is very hard to saw but i am probably going to change it by then so just stick with raphire


this is kinda dark but its about freindship and betrayal which has sort of happened recently or maybe not so recently but anyways... that it's... it's a litte long but it's split up so its not so noticable...

have fun( or not... your chioce, i guess...)

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Comments


  • Dusty
    September 9, 2008
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    I enjoyed this very much...........hehehehe


  • whiterabbit.
    May 28, 2008

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    You did get very creative with the name lol. I like the way this piece makes you think. Thanks for entering