Wings as dark nights,
aspiring hellish desires,
dwells in flames of treachery;
in violation of confidence.
An angel of fire, in unbearable warmth
amid embracing blazes, in trance,
of ashamed divine transgressions,
contemplate nothing, except imperfection.
Author notes
PROMPT: PICTURE(ARTIST UNKNOWN)
36 words
A contest entry
- Picture prompt.. Semi-Quickie..(PIF) by Angelflower.
766 points, ended May 28, 2008, 9 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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This was a wonderful take on the prompt..
I really enjoyed this..
Thank you very much for sharing..
Best of luck..
Angel
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oh aspiring hellish desires hehehehe
this piece says so much with your creative wording and It read so well out loud
Hope you do well in the contest darl
Cin
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