Lost Angel

Cast beyond the gates Hell
Fires burns with her precious wings
The tips chard, black ashes form
Pain inside, she will endure
Lost the path, gone astray
Heaven becomes a faded memory to her

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PROMPT: PICTURE(ARTIST UNKNOWN)
credit :http://img1.liveinternet.ru/images/attach/b/2/1/360/1360658_Bringer_of_pain.jpg
20-36 words

A contest entry

Picture prompt.. Semi-Quickie..(PIF) by Angelflower. 766 points, ended May 28, 2008, 9 entries
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lost-angel
December 4, 2008

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yea-my name all over it, in more than one way! i love it, even though it's sad-but it's me... thanks for the link...

Angelflower
May 27, 2008

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This was wonderful!!!
You did a beautiful job with the prompt..
Thank you for sharing this..
Best of luck..

Angel

right now

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