The first time I tasted
I found my favorite candy,
a melt in your mouth Hersheys bar.
Years Hersheys satified my sweet tooth
all I needed
all I wanted
just like you.
Then there was Resses
an out of this world combination,
milk chocolate wrapped around creamy rich peanut butter, perfect!
Resses is a new flavor I cannot resist.
now fresh
now more
just like him.
Come back, come back!
Baby I was wrong,
oh so wrong.
Can't you understand!
Baby I needed something new,
but now I need you
my old reliable,
melt in my mouth
Hersheys Bar.
Author notes
A bit of a sweet tooth...
A contest entry
- STAY. by DAMSELx.
420 points, ended May 29, 2008, 30 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What was the honest impression, feeling you had reading this poem?
Comments
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Wow! Great metaphor! This definitely satisfied my sweet tooth for candy and for cheating poems. Thank you for your entry, I wish you best of luck with this chocolaty piece!
--DAMSELx -
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Thank you very much, I am glad you enjoyed it.
~Kate~
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