Soft pools of amber light
warming the arctic
of your mind -
slowly melting away
all lingering snow -
letting way
for budding flowers.
Author notes
Prompt: 20words/20minutes
"Where beams of imagination play,
The memory's soft figures melt away."
Alexander Pope
BG: picture by bro888 on photobucket.com
Pic: Grey Lily by Welsh_Nic44
In a list
A contest entry
- 10/20/20 Quickie!!! Yayy by kiwigirljacks.
600 points, ended May 24, 2008, 7 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Be honest here.
Comments
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This is lovely. I loved the way you carried the theme so well throughout the poem, and found it very clever that you made such a short poem so effective. Gorgeous
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Just AMAZING!
SOft pools of Amber light?! Who would ever think of such a beautiful sight? You are a truly amazing poet.
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you do have magic inside you.Keep writing. Beautiful poem about the way nature touches us.
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BEAUTIFUL!!!
Nature's awesome beauty comes to calm the troubled mind and heart.
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grats on the silver!! so well deserved.
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Very beautiful!! You have captured the prompt well and done it in such a gorgeous way!
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Beautifully written! I love the imagery and flow.
The ending was absolutely AMAZING! Excellent job!!!
+ Jackie -
i forgot to clap lol
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another amazing poem!!
Very visual I feel sorounded in soft amber light -
"warming the arctic of your mind" I really like that.
Wonderful work.
Best of luck.
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Your work is always so softly enchanting. Love it, as usual!!! well done with the prompt and best of luck!!
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this is very beautiful. love the background.
and the write is jus wonderful
great job and good luck
tak ecare
stephanie
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