My love grows stronger
Each and every day
I'm hurting no longer
never been loved this way
The sun shines brighter;
my heart beats strong
You said I am a fighter
You were right all along
You took me beyond the pain
sheltered me from the rain
Your guidance gave me hope
Now, I know I can cope
Every day you comfort me
All through the storm
Every way you set me free
Your love keeps me warm
My soulmate you truly are
Loving me unconditionally
No dream can be too far
Nothing you do maliciously
Loving you became my life
Someday I'll be your wife
It is more than just love
You are my angel from above
Tears now flow for happiness
You are my sweet nectar
You did away with my distress
You eliminated my specter
Constant pain once haunted me
Hurting, discouraging pain
Never will I want to flee
For your love keeps me sane
A contest entry
- Hopeless Romantics by N.W. Clerk.
1200 points, ended September 6, 2008, 39 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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this is a very beautiful write and i enjoyed it very much. thank you so much for entering my contest and i wish you the best of luck! ~CarnalNineTailedFox
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Thanks for entering this into my contest. I really enjoy reading this. It was very sweet. I know someone I'd love to send this out to. I wish you much luck.
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"Tears now flow for happiness
You are my sweet nectar
You did away with my distress
You eliminated my specter"
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Very well written Wow thanks for entering my contest.
I wish ya the best of luck.
..<3..
Shelly -
This seems to be a very special poem to a very special person. Finding a soul mate is a truly wonderful thing. I enjoyed the read. Thanks for your entry.
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Very well written and my favorite part was when you said "The sun shines brighter;
my heart beats strong
You said I am a fighter
You were right all along
You took me beyond the pain
sheltered me from the rain
Your guidance gave me hope
Now, I know I can cope" that was worded so well. thanks for entering my contest i wish you the best of luck.
..<3..
Shelly -
very nice write on love . . liked "Your guidance gave me hope" and "My soulmate you truly are" . . good job
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I can definately relate to this one, considering I've been there and although he's trying to push me away, I have told him the feeligns grow stronger each day and I wont give up on him, there's no way.
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Very uplifting, gives us all some hope
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I agree, this poem is good, but about halfway through the poem it begins to become forced and usual rhyme.
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it flowed perfectly until it reached paragraph nine.. there the rhyme scheme seem a little forced, but you managed to save it on the last paragraph... beside that fact the poem is wonderful! loved it!
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OOPs!!!! missed the clappies
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It seems you have been where I have and have found that special someone who healed the wound.I can really relate to your words and I wish you every happiness, Ros
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Aww.. I love this.. it's amazing what can happen under the hand of love
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I say--- 75%
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I say--- 75%
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I love this. I give it a 90%
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