Words fall softly
precipitating in the coolness
of the spring air;
crystallizing in the darkness;
shining through the night -
but descending upon
cool sheets
that lay empty -
between our
bodies.
Author notes
Prompt:
25-30 words
Nocturnal whispers
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Comments
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A very sensual whispers under the moonlight gaze. Words were weave into delicate patterns that will leave the readers mind some things to ponder.
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