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i love you

my love for you is strong
when im with you
i feel like
nothin can go wrong

when im holding your hands
i love them
so so much
i love you

your the best
the freekin best
hahaha
i love you the best

pleese dont critizice my poem its for my love

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  • DarkRomantic113
    August 7, 2008
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    Cute


  • lowercase prelude gold member
    June 2, 2008

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    love can be amazing and it can be heartbreaking. but as you've penned in these words, the love you have is the best. great write.


  • individuality gold member
    May 29, 2008

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    i will use an old saying of mine here that i have not used for awhile to say - love, it twists us into crazy shapes and all we can do is scream


  • Mademokid
    May 29, 2008
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    thx for the comments


  • takenfromgrace
    May 27, 2008
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    awww that's cute. Short and sweet. =^-^= great job.


  • Angelic Princess21
    May 24, 2008

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    very nice write. you can feel so much love within the words great write hun keep up the good work

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