I drip into you;
softly flowing
onto your crystalline waters
surrounding me so;
a blanket of velvety;
delicately brushing - azure
cooling...
my amber eyes.
Author notes
Prompt:
Picture ((Picture from Karil @ Deviant Art))
25 words
In a list
A contest entry
- PIF QUICKIE 5/25/20 by Jeremy0826.
1000 points, ended May 24, 2008, 5 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Be honest here.
Comments
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amazing poem here, the wording and imagery is beautiful.
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awwww this is so beautiful
lovely write and good luck
take care
stephanie -
WOW! That is just gorgeous! You are dripping good vibes her...!!!
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Very beautiful words here!
Thanks so much for entering this poem
into my contest. I appreciate it and
wish you all the best with it!
Keep up the wonderful work here!
Jeremy0826
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Absolutely stunning!
Flawless
Best of luck
♥
Stay safe
~Manda
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