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Meadowlands

meadow lands ablaze
with poppies swaying gaily
falcon eyes her prey

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  • azure85 gold member
    May 26, 2008

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    meadow lands ablaze
    with poppies swaying gaily
    falcon eyes her prey

    Yes, it truly is like that-the pretty fields of poppies, and the cycle of life goes on. Thank you for a good nature haiku.


  • DogFish silver member
    May 25, 2008
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    California sunshine-
    is it the last legal high?


  • grannyeri gold member
    May 25, 2008

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    Both parts to any environment - the beautiful and the survival. Liked this traditional haiku you have penned here.


  • marlene47 silver member
    May 25, 2008
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    Nice juxtaposition, yet everything as it should be.
    Marlene


  • individuality gold member
    May 24, 2008

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    a good poem which shows the soft side of beauty but then a harder edge with the last line showing how survival is the name of the game.

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