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Postman

Checked the mail
Bills Bills Bills
file thirteen full.

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  • Walking shadow
    June 9, 2008

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    Great

    That is what I find in my mailbox just junk and bills. I do not ever get a good letter from the Postman ever. Only good mail I get is in my email box.


  • azure85 gold member
    May 26, 2008

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    Checked the mail
    Bills Bills Bills
    file thirteen full.

    Yes, that is all that seems to be in the mailbox anymore! Good haiku describing this!


  • DogFish silver member
    May 25, 2008
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    file fourteen is filling fast
    file fifteen is still not classed!


  • Tristan Storm
    May 25, 2008
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    I loved this. It is so true of life. Continuous bills to process and one file filling up quicker than the other.

    If I may.. the haiku and the border in my opinion are quite ironic. In my mind so many bills are scary and depressing and yet you make it seem a joy! Wonderful!

    Keep up the good work
    Hugz
    Himler


  • grannyeri gold member
    May 25, 2008

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    Doesn't take long to fill that up - bills are never ending, always being sent out through snail mail or cyberspace.

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