Corrupted I was by others,
I sinned.
My decisions, heavy burdens,
I committed.
Through flames of Hell
I emerge.
Wide span, my wings open,
I rise.
I am now Forgiven.
Author notes
pic prompt
A contest entry
- Picture prompt.. Semi-Quickie..(PIF) by Angelflower.
766 points, ended May 28, 2008, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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This was a really good take on the prompt..
It was sad in the begining but forgiveness really feels so wonderful.. Thank you very much for sharing this.. Best of luck..
Angel
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Nice
We all have sinned, and it's how I see you try your best that inspires me.
Keep up the wonderful writes V~
Love ya, Peace~
-Timothy
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fierce write !
well done with this one
Tasha
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Wonderfully written for this picture prompt sweetheart. We are all the rising Phoenix if we just let His will work in our lives. I Love you...Scott
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I like this alot. I think it is a fabulous picture and I am pleased to hear that the poem had a positive outcome. The wonderful thing about God's love is forgiveness.
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Wow... *looks for others* Applause! This is deep. I like your take to the prompt. Like mine but with a better outcome!
I wish you luck.
~Kystal Angel
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This is absolutely a great piece. You speak loud and clear dear one.
Come on Tory kick the heck out of that illness...
Love you
Candace -
This is absolutely a great piece. You speak loud and clear dear one. Come on Tory kick the heck out of that illness...
Love you
Candace
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fascinating write
We all fall down and sin I suppose. Rising up again is the important part. great poem and nice job for a quickie contest.God bless you, Mark PS get better soon
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