Burning,
yearning,
urges ascend from within..
Stroking,
provoking,
against my flushed skin..
Hold me,
console me,
like a moth to the flame,
I lay bare, my pleasures
for your love to tame.
Author notes
NO MORE THEN 20-36 WORDS
PROMPT: PICTURE(ARTIST UNKNOWN)
A contest entry
- Picture prompt.. Semi-Quickie..(PIF) by Angelflower.
766 points, ended May 28, 2008, 9 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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This was so wonderful.. You did a very great write for this prompt.. I'm very shocked!!!!
but wonderfully surprised that you got this out of the prompt.. Best of luck..
Angel
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Thank you sweetness and thanks for bronze.
It's amazing what my warped mind sees in prompts lol
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Stunning! This is just perfect for that firey pic! Got goosebumps reading it
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lol My mind was in overdrive earlier. I love the pic, and that's what came to mind hehe
Thank you!!
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i really like this poem it is so deep and descibes the picture so well, keep up the wonderful writing, ~Amy
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Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Linda
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Ooohhh.....nice! I didn't think sensual...glad you did. "I lay bare, my pleasures for your love to tame" DAMN! Good choice of words there. I wish you luck!
~Kystal Angel
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Thank you, I don't know why I was thinking along those lines lol The things one sees in a pic, huh?
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hmmmmmmmmmmmmm now we all know where your mind is... but its a great place to be.... thanks for sharing and good luck in contest!!!!!
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Thank you. I appreciate your comment.
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Well goodness, I think I know where your mind is
This is incredible! You captured the title well, I guess I need to look at the picture
Best of luck in this contest!
and love
Nyetta
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Thanks sweety, although this is my take on the pic, cause yep lol you know where my mind went.
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Nicely done Linda.
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Not really, but thank you for your always kind comments.
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nice...
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Thanks.
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