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[ The devils influence so strong ]

The devils influence so strong

The worst things

Not even seeming wrong

Murder'lust'Drugs

Getting our youth into gangs

Becoming thugs

The devil gets to us

Fill in our mouth with horrible words

Little kids knowing how to cuss

That's the devils influence

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  • Angelflower
    May 25, 2008

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    This was really good..
    And also very true..
    I really liked your take on the prompt..
    Great job!! thanks for sharing..
    Best of luck..

    Angel