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Write Away My Pain

I put on a false smile so you won't see
the pain I hold so deep inside of me.
I smile away the tears
and shower away my fears.
I sew the pieces of my heart
when I'm alone in the dark.
Never will you see me cry
or notice as my soul dies
because I walk around with my false grin
and reveal my sorrow with this red pen.

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  • mamajoey
    May 26, 2008
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    are you reading my mind? try to describe instead of tell.


  • SweetZsKuLLy
    May 24, 2008

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    powerful.
    this is really good stuff
    a little short for my preference, but it holds the whole emotion needed, the emotion of a broken heart who still hides..

    it's really a good piece .