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boyfriend

dear max
u talk my heart
thats when i start
to love

love you i do
thats when i ask you
will you
b my  boyfriend

A contest entry

pleese dont critizice my poem its for my love

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  • Mademokid
    May 29, 2008
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    nice

    i love it so much


  • Mademokid
    May 25, 2008
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    vary good

    this is definitaly winning this conteast thx for the entry