Raw and torn...
worn with age
my heart is old
not the same
The blade is my friend
as I bring it to my wrists
slicing gently
watching my skin open
Then blood seeps down
red and hot
pouring and dripping
to the ground
My tears have frozen
with my pain
as i hit
a bigger vein
Red spurts and falls
And weakness takes over me
The room around me spins
I can barely see
Suicide is my escape
From the pain of this world
From the teasing and tauntings
and the verbal pain
My eyes flutter shut..
I take a deep breath..
goodbye to you...
goodbye my friends
A contest entry
- HEARTBREAK, SUICIDAL LOVE, ANYTHING DEPRESSING by beautifull-ugly228.
425 points, ended May 29, 2008, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Hope you like it!
Comments
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Awwww, this is really sad, and i truly hope that it isnt true, but i know better mostly. Its a very good poem through, and is very relatable...good job!
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Very well written I liked it a lot. My only complaint is in your authors notes if you could put the inspiration in it. thankyou other than that it was amazing I liked it a lot. so far well these 3 entries ive gotten they have been awesome totally rad.
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