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carpet mites
with bachelor degrees
time to vacuum

 

 

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  • DogFish silver member
    May 25, 2008
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    ...definitly time for spring cleaning!


  • azure85 gold member
    May 25, 2008

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    carpet mites
    with bachelor degrees
    time to vacuum

    You must have the most interesting residence! A very unique haiku, thank you so much.


  • Bams
    May 25, 2008

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    enjoying going through the entries

    this has scope of residence

    a dreary fact, by higher learning lifestyle perhaps that can't ignore it. very interesting progression to get from point a to c from how b has to get back to basics even if with advanced carpet for steps...

    schedule a smile, don't pile up a frown worse than dusting off some books --
    babies are my subject


  • grannyeri gold member
    May 25, 2008

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    Cute modern haiku - always time to vacuum when one has carpet. Who knows what lurks beneath the surface?


  • cheaphotelsign
    May 24, 2008

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    hahahaha....i am picturing the habitat in which the mites are residing...shag. this is awesome. you're so clever...i mean, who the hell can write about carpet mites and make it good....? YOU!


    • sheltered
      May 24, 2008
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      I just looked around my apartment and wrote what I saw. lol


  • marlene47 silver member
    May 24, 2008
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    Too funny - smart mites, or a bachelor vacuuming perhaps.
    Enjoyed!
    Marlene


  • Tristan Storm
    May 24, 2008

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    Ah, this is very good! I love the whole image it gave me quite a giggle

    Keep up the good work!
    Hugz
    Himler

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