carpet mites
with bachelor degrees
time to vacuum
A contest entry
- Weekend Haiku by azure85.
600 points, ended May 28, 2008, 24 entries
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Please tell me what you think
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...definitly time for spring cleaning!
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carpet mites
with bachelor degrees
time to vacuum
You must have the most interesting residence! A very unique haiku, thank you so much.
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enjoying going through the entries
this has scope of residence
a dreary fact, by higher learning lifestyle perhaps that can't ignore it. very interesting progression to get from point a to c from how b has to get back to basics even if with advanced carpet for steps...
schedule a smile, don't pile up a frown worse than dusting off some books --
babies are my subject -
Cute modern haiku - always time to vacuum when one has carpet. Who knows what lurks beneath the surface?
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hahahaha....i am picturing the habitat in which the mites are residing...shag. this is awesome. you're so clever...i mean, who the hell can write about carpet mites and make it good....? YOU!
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I just looked around my apartment and wrote what I saw. lol
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Too funny - smart mites, or a bachelor vacuuming perhaps.
Enjoyed!
Marlene -
Ah, this is very good! I love the whole image it gave me quite a giggle
Keep up the good work!
Hugz
Himler
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