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clover waving

clover waving
perfuming the summer breeze
a bee buzzes by

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  • Bams
    May 29, 2008

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    thanks for sharing such arousal

    this is a time-lapsed poetic opportunity of nature giving more

    this generates a turn of the said to make a game to see other paired events instead of just some static scene. you gave a nice start with a well known honey result, quality in the collection being so attractive to us before transformed beautiful.

    I liked this one centered for swayable wind feel,
    babies are my subject


  • Aerden gold member
    May 26, 2008
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    The pun in your tagline _made_ this for me.


  • DogFish silver member
    May 25, 2008

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    the lawn mower buzzes by
    bee and clover lost in gas fumes!

    I cut my grass for the first time in '08 this afternoon...I had caratin regrets about the tufts of clover that were just about high enough to begin to flower...


  • grannyeri gold member
    May 25, 2008

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    Easy to imagine what you write about in this traditional haiku - liked the alliteration in that last line as well.


  • marlene47 silver member
    May 25, 2008
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    The senses are alive in this one. Liked the breeze and buzzing bee image.
    Good job!


  • azure85 gold member
    May 24, 2008

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    clover waving
    perfuming the summer breeze
    a bee buzzes by

    A lovely haiku about a summer day, the images are one that makes the reader smile for the season. Thank you so much.

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