The light shines in the nigh of new moon.
Dark wet shapes appear stoic beneath the depressed sky.
Open to the bright reconciliation at the end of the tunnel.
Close beneath the enticing valley of death.
Trek upon the unknown for trails leading to new reality.
Eternal life is remembrance.
A contest entry
- Suitable-for-Publishing Poetry Contest. Prewrites welcome. by Expat4Cebu.
500 points, ended May 30, 2008, 28 entries
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I would appreciate feedback regardless of what it is im just looking to improve my poetry
Comments
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hmmmmmm wow thats a lot of big words...
a bit too much to swallow but it helps that it is short. the format also helps keep the readers attention because its not all scrunched together - that is a lot of poets mistakes. so good job on that
anyways thanks for entering
good luck -
Thank you for entering my contest and sorry it is taking me so long to finish this contest!
I have read this poem several times now and I think this is a really beautiful write, you have some really good imagery in this.
Thanks again and keep on writing!
Annie
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Nice imagery
Thanks for this entry. I like it.
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